One day, I was at the park. I was walking on the pavement and I fell. I heard someone say hello and waved at me. It was a tortoise. She had an orange shell and it was very shiny. Then, we walked along and she told me one of her funny jokes. I laughed a lot. Then I told her, "Wow you have a talent!" and she said, "Oh well, thank you!" and a few minutes later, she told me, "Oh yes, what's your name?" I said, "Oh my name is Lizbeth, what's yours?" She said, "Oh my name is Abygail" And I said, " That's a lovely name" and she said, "Well, thank you."
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Carol team 100WC
10/7/2013 06:14:37 pm
Hello Lizbeth, I loved reading this...fancy meeting a tortoise that tells jokes and is called Abygail! You have a great imagination. I also like the way you have included some direct speech - this works well in the writing. Keep writing :)
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