One day I was on my porch when suddenly I heard a crack in my yard. I went outside and saw a beautiful blue bird building a nest the size of a coconut. Then, later on the bird had an egg. The next day the egg was hatching. It was a dark blue color. After the egg hatched the mom went to find food. Then, something terrible happened, the baby bird fell! I carefully grabbed him and put him back in his nest before the mom came. Then, the mom came and gave her baby bird some worms for food.
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9/7/2013 10:29:30 am
Lidia,
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Hannah team 100wc
9/8/2013 07:40:50 am
Hello, thank you for your 100wc entry. I enjoyed reading it! I especially loved your use of alliteration with 'beautiful blue bird' I could almost see it :-)keep writing!
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Ms. Roeske
9/9/2013 04:38:57 am
I really liked your story. I felt as if I was there watching you take care of the bird. I like how you described the color of the bird and egg . Great work!
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John
9/20/2013 12:21:24 pm
I love the story that you wrote. I enjoyed it
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