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Kasandra Rm 110 100WC - Cheetah photo

9/30/2013

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There was a weird looking thing. The object was moving or controlling a moving machine. I got on top o the machine with my friend. The machine was moving on and on. I wonder why is it so bumpy? When is it going to stop? So I lay there. A few hours later, I got up because its getting hot. My friend is not there anymore. Nothing there but a net. When I turn around there was an object with legs. The object was holding a net and tried to get me. I jump out "ouch," I roared. The strange object got me and took me to the laboratory. They took a quick look at my body. A few months later my friend and I went to somewhere I can see my kind. They also treat us as kings!
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Ms. Doyle
9/30/2013 12:39:46 pm

Kasandra,
I LOVE how you told the story from the cheetah's point of view! Very creative voice, keep up the good work!

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Lidia
1/8/2014 07:51:51 am

I loved how you started your story :-)

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