I was in my basement. It was really dark. I was scared. I kept walking and then I saw a bright light coming from that red door. I was wondering what was in there. I got inside and I found myself in my nightmare! My nightmare was full of zombies trying to attack me. I went inside even deeper. Then, I found myself inside my dreams full of shoes, malls, teddy bears and my BFF. It was magical. It was everything a girl ever wanted. I went back home, I ate, went to sleep, and wondered about that.
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Gill Ower
9/21/2013 06:59:40 pm
Thank you for taking part in this week's 100WC, Jessenia, and it's lovely to see a photo of your work, too. I was glad your nightmare turned into a sweet dream at the end. You succeeded in writing a complete story in just a few words, so well done!
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Eduardo
9/25/2013 01:35:04 pm
I really like your story because it is so nice
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