Suddenly I stopped. I saw an enormous lake with big fish. Taking out my fishing pole, a fish caught my attention. I put a piece of meat on the hook. I waited patiently, then I felt something pulling my pole. I took out my clean fishing pole, and this fish was bigger than a 3 ft tall standing adult! I saw that fish and got really terrified. I didn't like this fish, I don't know what caught my attention but certainly it wasn't this fish. Still I named him. It was called, "Fire." I put him back in the water.
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Maria Guadalupe Moctezuma
9/13/2013 12:59:14 pm
I really like your story Eduardo :)
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Kathy @ Team 100WC
9/14/2013 11:19:19 am
Eduardo I really enjoyed your story, and love the name of the fish! And how nice to practice catch and release, sending Fire back to its home. Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
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Eduardo cantoran
9/25/2013 01:27:22 pm
Thanks for both comments!!!:)
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