What do you think he said? "I hate it or I love it?"
One day a man told Sly the Snake that he needs to make a spooky house. He got home and his mail box was open. He replied, "Oh, I guess I have mail." The mail had his payment inside. Sly the Snake thought, "The plans are covered in cobwebs." But Sly said, "I Will still build it anyways." Sly was surprised when he was done building. It looked just as planned. It had broken glass, creaking wooden porch, plastic windows, spider clock and strange plastic gargoyles. One night the owner of the house turned up... he gasped!
What do you think he said? "I hate it or I love it?"
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Estrella Estrada
10/28/2013 08:45:35 am
Nice job Andrea I really liked your story and I think the owner said he loved it :)
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Andrea Diaz
11/14/2013 05:53:01 am
thnx Estrella
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Christian Hernandez
10/28/2013 09:44:44 am
Loved the story although a couple of spelling errors are int it ! Btw ms.doyle I left my journal in class !!!!!
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Andrea Diaz
11/15/2013 08:55:03 am
Thnx Christian :)
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