I went to a circus. It was called "Comedy Circus." It was a descent size circus tent. I sat in my seat to watch the funny show. First, they started off with throwing pies at everyone. I ate the pie off my face and I thought to myself, "Mmm, this is yummy." An orange clown came out, waved hello, and said, "Did everyone enjoy the pie?" I laughed a little. Then, a tortoise comes out and walks onto the pavement and in a flash of an eye, it disappeared, then reappeared in a cage. Then, the tortoise said, "I thought the State of Liberty meant freedom for everyone? This is not fair." Everyone laughed.
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Ms. Doyle
10/8/2013 11:45:21 pm
I loved your description of the Comedy Circus. I would love to go to one of those but I would probably eat the pies before they get thrown on my face :-) Nice use of creative dialogue with the Tortoise!
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