Nickolas 116 The Mystery Pt. 3 … I woke up in a daze, wondering to myself “What just happened?” I decided to listen to Pandora so I could calm myself down. The next day, I went to my friend Kevin’s house, because he knew a lot about anything I asked him if he knew about Freddy Fazbear’s Pizza. He told me that it was a kids place where kids would have birthday parties and celebrate. He also told me about the dark secret. I left and went to walk to the pizza place again. I turned on the light but then the lights went out... Continued in “The Mystery Pt. 4” | Estefani 116 The Classroom “Shhhhhh” said the teacher. The class became quiet and they continued working. A student named Charlotte was hearing noises but nobody heard them. She asked her classmates if they heard anything but everybody said no or to go to your seat. The teacher said for her to sit in the corner because she was talking. Then, the lights went out. All the kids were screaming but Charlotte was calm and was hearing voices calling her to get out of the classroom. When she did, she felt like someone was behind her. And then, she screamed and was never seen again. | Adrian G. 116 “I’m so thirsty,” Tyrone exclaimed while playing a video game.` He went down stairs to go get water. He never liked down stairs he didn’t feel alone there. When he was going down the stairs he felt someone push him and fell down. He looked back and no one was there, then the door shut and ran up to get out but it was locked. Then, the lights went out. He got really scared, “What is happening?!” He started screaming then he felt a hand scratching him and hitting him. Then his dad unlocked the door and saved him. They moved out of there. | Kayla 116 The Elevator “Creek” I heard as i walked down the dark hallway heading to the creepy elevator. I was getting scared but when i was in the elevator, suddenly the lights went out. The elevator closed I was stuck i tried every button nothing happened. Then the lights are on i ran to my room but then he jumped out of nowhere a black cat he stared at me with curiosity. I tried to pet him but he ran when i went to my room i saw a note “ You will see me again” i wondered was that the cat?... |
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Gemma Garcia
5/31/2016 08:11:46 am
I like the way Estefani added that Charlotte disappered forever.
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Nickolas
5/31/2016 08:12:49 am
I liked all the suspense that Estefani put in the story.
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Estefani Avila
5/31/2016 08:14:22 am
I voted for Kayla because I like the elevator because you could make different kinds of scary stories and I like the one she wrote.
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Juan Rodriguez
5/31/2016 08:16:35 am
I liked kayla's story because it sounded like I was in there and it was interesting when it was scary.
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Yahir
5/31/2016 09:24:18 am
“I’m so thirsty,” Tyrone exclaimed while playing a video game.` Did he get water after that? :|
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Julissa
5/31/2016 09:25:58 am
Shhhhhh” said the teacher. The class became quiet and they continued working.
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Isabel
5/31/2016 09:25:59 am
Estefani
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Melina
5/31/2016 09:26:13 am
"When she did, she felt like someone was behind her. And then, she screamed and was never seen again."
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Araceli
5/31/2016 09:26:23 am
I tried to pet him but he ran when i went to my room i saw a note “ You will see me again” i wondered was that the cat?...
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Alejandra
5/31/2016 09:26:24 am
''What just happened?” I decided to listen to Pandora so I could calm myself down.
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karina
5/31/2016 09:26:43 am
´When he was going down the stairs he felt someone push him and fell down.´´
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Daniel
5/31/2016 09:26:44 am
I like Nickolas' story because I liked the sentence "I woke up in a daze, wondering to myself “What just happened?” because it was very spooky.
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Sofia
5/31/2016 09:26:46 am
"When she did, she felt like someone was behind her." I really like this sentence because you made it look like someone was really behind her. (Estefani)
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Lyssette
5/31/2016 09:26:50 am
"And then, she screamed and was never seen again."
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Lizbeth
5/31/2016 09:26:54 am
Estefani
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Ashley
5/31/2016 09:27:01 am
A student named Charlotte was hearing noises but nobody heard them.I liked this sentence because it makes the story sound mestirious.
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Erika
5/31/2016 09:27:08 am
“Creek” I heard as i walked down the dark hallway heading to the creepy elevator.
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omar
5/31/2016 09:27:09 am
“I’m so thirsty,” Tyrone exclaimed id say i adrain because he said that one funny sentence
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Soleira
9/6/2016 04:18:35 pm
It looks so fun really
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