One day, me and my friend were outside. Suddenly the sky slowly got darker. So we went under the door for cover and it started to rain faster and faster. Each time we spoke, it started to rain harder and harder. So finally we saw a tornado and we got sucked in and we got out and we were somewhere else. Then we saw another tornado and we got sucked in and went back. Suddenly, I just woke up.
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Ms. Doyle
10/21/2013 12:04:26 pm
Ashley, You create a suspenseful story here. The tornado sounds powerful like a portal, transporting you to different locations! Keep up the good work.
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Maram abdelkarim
12/11/2013 10:21:36 am
Good job ashley
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