116 - Diana Cervantes“MOM!” I whispered really loud across the hallway. The lights flickered continuously as I tiptoed to the room where a door creaked open. I could hear my heartbeat inside my chest. It felt as if I had a lot of bricks on my chest. The air got damper as I walked closer to the room. It was creepy, I got closer. I opened the door and I saw an old lady rocking on a rocking chair and I walked closer to the lady. The lights flickered. Then the lights went out! The lights turned on and the lady was gone. | 118 Dominic JaramilloIt was an ordinary day at my grandmas house with my cousin Katie and my brother Adrian that are both 16. They were both playing the Ouija board. I was just watching them under my covers and then the lights went out! I screamed and then I went under my covers all the way and my cousin was screaming, because she heard something say in a really deep voice, “Get out of here!” My grandma had a doll from Mexico. Then, the doll started laughing! We ran super fast down the stairs and hid there as quiet as we could. |
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Natalia Tapia
11/18/2016 11:00:33 am
I like Diana's story because it leaves a cliffhanger which makes the readers more curios.
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Cherion Brock
11/18/2016 12:56:44 pm
good job Dominic I loved your story.
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Aidet Preciado
11/18/2016 12:57:24 pm
I vote for Dominic because the story maid sence
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Brenda
11/18/2016 01:06:30 pm
I like Dominic's because it talks about a Ouija board and I like scary games.
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Mariana Aceves
11/18/2016 04:55:29 pm
I AGREE WITH YOU
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Edwin Andrade
11/18/2016 03:29:33 pm
I liked Diana's because you can feel that you are in the story.
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Mariana Aceves
11/18/2016 04:53:08 pm
i pick Dominic:s because it inspires me and he is good and i know he can win this time at 100 word challenge but for Dominic"CONGRATULATIONS"
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Mariana Aceves
11/18/2016 04:54:02 pm
diana because she gave a scary story in it and "CONGRADULATIONS"
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Mariana Aceves
11/18/2016 04:54:58 pm
WELL IM HAPPY FOR 2016 WINNERS "CONGRADULATIONS YOU BOTH AND KEEP UP THE HARD WORK YOU 2 INSPIRE OUR HEARTS
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mariana Aceves
11/30/2016 06:18:13 pm
Dont get mad at the truth
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